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Script Outline Idea condensed: 

Credits: 15 sec 

Paulie (Main character) buys new car performance parts from the black market (he talks to a car part dealer whose name is Mr. Clutch) ( 20 sec).Paulie closing the hood of the car showing that he has installed the part ( 5 sec). Then he is on the way to the car meet/race spot ( 10 sec) . Once he gets to the car meet/ race spot, he finds  his best friends Jay this cocky guy with a 1999 Porche Boxter. When Paulie parks Jay comes up to him asking what's under da hood (15 sec). Then we say some goofy names for the car pats instead of the actual names (20 sec). Then they get ready to race, and Paulie stalls his car and looking dumb(15 sec). 

 

 

*Script* 

BACK ALLEY – NIGHT 

-Paulie leans casually against his car, arms crossed. He looks calm, like he’s done this before. 

- MR. CLUTCH walks up holding a case. 

PAULIE 
MR. Clutch? 

MR. CLUTCH 

Depends, who's asking? 

PAULIE 
Its Paul. You got the package? 

MR. CLUTCH 

-Mr. Clutch opens the case carefully. Inside is a rare looking performance part.  

Original and imported, took me six months to track it down.  

PAULIE 

-Paulie nods, impressed. 

It better wake the car up. 

MR. CLUTCH 
-walks away 

Paulie smiles. 

Duration: 30 seconds. 

PAULIE’S DRIVEWAY – NIGHT 

PAULIE  

- Paulie tightens the last bolt and closes the hood. 

-Gets a call from Jay 

JAY (talking throughout the phone) 

 Yo man we’re almost up. Where you at. 

PAULIE 

-IN A HURRY 

Oh shit I thought I had more time, il leave right now 

Duration: 20   seconds.  

STREET – NIGHT  

-Paulie drives toward the car meet.   

Duration: 10 seconds.  

CAR MEET – NIGHT  

-Paulie pulls in smoothly.  Jay, leaning on his Car, watches closely before walking over.  

JAY  

-daps up Paulie 

Always late huh. 

PAULIE  

Sorry bro i was busy tuning up the new part. 

JAY 

Oh yeah? Pop the hood then 

  Duration: 15 seconds.   

PAULIE  

-smirks 

-Pops his car’s hood open 

Custom turbo encubobulator.  

Forged mega pistons.  

And a fat thingamajigger.  

JAY 

-Stares in awe 

How? 

PAULIE  

i got my ways  

JAY  

Whatever, man. Hope it’s faster than your mouth.  

 

PAULIE  

Yet Slower than your mom’s 

*smirks  

 Duration: 20 seconds.  

RACE ORGANIZER 

Alright boys line em up!!! 

-The cars car line up and are ready to race 

JAY 

So you ready to lose!? 

PAULIE 

-Smirks, well see about that 

RACE ORGANIZER 

3, 2, 1, go! 

 

-Paulie stalls his car 

PAULIE 

Shit, shit, sh- 

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